research paper

Hello, I have a reseach paper, that I already have compete it more than %90 of it. I just need you to re read it and make sure it’s going very smoothly and add some stuff in Discussion and Conclusion parts. I just need the paper to look great so i get 100 out 100. Also please fix any grammar mistakes you find and make the sentence connected very well.


please read the part that written by red very carefully and fix the grammar mistakes

Thanks in advance