Follow this process
1. Read the draft.
2. Leave in-text comments on the draft. I expect 2 comments on every major part/idea/point. Please also include a few comments on grammar or sentence structure.
3. Answer in detail and in complete sentences the peer review questions on page 530 to 531 of Longman textbook.
4. Finally, answer these question in complete sentences:
- Transitions: Are they idea hooks? Can they be improved? How?
- Conclusion: Is it effective? Does it restate the thesis in some way? Does it stay within the essay’s ideas, or does it introduce new ideas that have not been supported?